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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information on how the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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, and the United
Kingdom
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 manage waste products.
Overall
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,
according to
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 the first and second pie charts, it can be seen that the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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 use three types of processes to manage the waste, like recycling, underground, and destroying waste by fire,
while
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 the third pie chart shows that the United
Kingdom
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's removal damage
process
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 includes two more forms
such
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 as chemical treatment and dumping at sea. The highest percentage of incineration
process
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 is used in The United
Kingdom
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 with 82
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percent
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, followed by
Sweden
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 (20
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percent
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) and the lowest percentage is shown for the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 (9
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percent
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).
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, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 cleans the environment using the underground
process
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, and the percentage is 55,
then
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Sweden
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 and the United
Kingdom
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, 22
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percent
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 and 8
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percent
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, respectively. The most important measures to protect the clean air and nature implemented by the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 are recycling damages, albeit for the United
Kingdom
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, where the number of using
this
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process
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 is only 2
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percent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words republic, korea, sweden, kingdom, process, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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