Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

It is generally seen that the wealthy

nations

becomes

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more wealthy and

likewise

poor

nations

are becoming

more

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poorer. There is an argument about

this

as some people say that the wealthy

nations

should support the poor

nations

in terms of

food

and

education

whereas others believe that the citizens should be taken care

by

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their own governments.

This

essay discusses

about

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the above statement.

Firstly

, Investment

of

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in

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developing countries

are

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beneficial for wealthy countries. They need to support poor countries not by investing but by aiding them in terms of

food

and

education

.

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, the massive seaport is constructed by

the

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China in Srilanka on 100 years duty holder basis.

This

help

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China to establish

their

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its

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market and it is not beneficial for Srilanka. At the same time, France provides

education

aid to Syria which will help Syria to build

educated

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an educated

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future

generation

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generations

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. At the same time, governments should act wisely to enhance their economy rather

depending

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on

the

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wealthy

nations

. Citizens should be provided with

food

and proper

education

which is a basic duty of a government. Relaying

aids

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from wealthy

nations

is not the right approach and the economic system will collapse if a nation

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depends

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depend

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ondepend

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another country.

For example

, the evacuation of the American army, who were funding Afghanistan has resulted in Afghanistan's economic crisis. To summarise, It is a good approach to receive

aids

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aid

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from a wealthy nation for

food

and

education

however

as

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from

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a

long term

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sustainability point of view, governments should take initiatives to build a strong economy

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in order

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inorder

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in order

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to be independent in serving basic needs to their citizens.