In many countries, governments spemd large amounts of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however think that this money would be better spent on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these opinions? Discuss, based on your knowledge and experience.

In the current world, governments of some countries are spending huge tolls of currency on creative works.

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communities are in support of

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acts of authority, most people are on the opposite side and according to

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more money should be invested

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the development of health and educational

facilities

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of

arts

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I am in the favour of

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and in the subsequent ,paragraphs I will be describing the reasons for taking the side.

To begin

with, creativity is something that people may admire after all their basic needs are fulfilled while most countries fail to provide all the basic necessities evenly to all their citizens. Despite

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fact, many governments intents to provide

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huge

budget

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for recreational

facilities

in order to get higher revenue since well of people are most likely to spend on amusement at a high cost. But as an administrative body, they should focus on the even distribution of

facilities

and make a greater investment in the development of quality education and improved hospitals for all as it is their basic right as citizens. Another thing to add up is that when the govt provides more emphasis on amusement over education or health there is a huge possibility to decrease the overall growth of that particular country which may lead to a crisis in

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hand.

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, improper medical

facilities

may result in a disease outbreak or a lack of educational

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may lead to unemployment problems

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larger scale. Overall, governments of all countries should make a balanced budget so that creativity gets attention after meeting the needs of the health and educational sectors.