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Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

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People have different views about which impact children's behaviour most, the
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 on
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 or the time
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 of watching
TV
. From my perspective, while I believe watching too much
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completely negative impact on Children's behaviour, I believe the
contents
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TV
 can
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influence
influences
infuences
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influence
kids
 in both positive and negative ways. It is true that there many drawbacks when
kids
 take several hours in front of the screen of
telesition
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television
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instead
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in stead
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instead
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 of doing
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outdoor
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out door
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 activities or communicating with their peers.
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Firstly
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, it can make
youngst
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youngest
 lead a sedentary lifestyle.
Therefore
,
this
 trend may cause many mental issues like depression, as well as
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physical
pysical
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physical
 problems like
overweight
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 and
bad
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having bad
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 eyesight.
Furthermore
, if the growing
kids
 spend most of their time
on
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watching
TV
, that means that they do not have too much time staying with their family and friends.
As a result
, it
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man
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 cause isolation and in the future, they may find that it is considerably hard for them to
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integrate
intergrate
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integrate
 themselves into
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society. Apart from these disadvantages mentioned above. I would argue the
contents
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TV
 programs can impact the younger
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generation
generations
genenration
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generation
 from both positive and
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negative
nagetive
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negative
 perspectives. On the one hand, some
TV
 programs are informative and educational,
such
 as some documentaries,
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 provide
kids
vivid
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 and interesting videos. Compared with class courses, they are more attractive for
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children
chirldren
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children
 to gain knowledge and skills.
On the other hand
,
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teenagers
teenages
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teenagers
tent
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tend
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 to like to emulate the actions of actors and actresses, and some
TV
 dramas have violent and sexual
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,
this
 trend probably causes youth crime.
Moreover
, many fast food companies and Hi-tech producers promote
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their
theiry
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their
 products on
TV
, which may encourage
kids
 to eat these unhealthy junk food or buy some digital gadgets which are useful. In conclusion, can lead
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lifestyle
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lifestyle
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 it can cause
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