The world today is very developed. Many policies have been introduced to create
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equality
,and
fairness
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society
. Some
people
think
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should accept
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number of
female
studentFix the agreement mistake
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in every subject.
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believe
that is
an unacceptable policy. But for me,
fairness
and
equality
should suitable for every situation
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society
.
With the
first
opinion
, the acceptance of some
people
to create
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equality
in
universities
is
that upholds human rights and
equality
, not
fairness
.
People
believe that
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should
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together in
universities
. The
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of male and female students in
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as well. That
opinion
it Remove the pronoun
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helps to promote gender
equality
. Especially, women
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in universities
universities
are fighting for women’s right to take up space in
society
are fighting to take up space and the leader should
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opportunities
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them.
In addition
,
people
believe that the
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which employers are looking for is
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leadership. It is something that has been lacking and that
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social taboos for a very long time in the world.
However
, if women have good leadership skills, social taboos can be eliminated.
With the
second
opinion
,
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believe
that is
an unacceptable policy. It is an
opinion
that upholds
fairness
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equality
.
Instead
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the policy can
be increaseChange the verb form
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unemploymentCorrect article usage
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rate. There are industries that more suitable for men like
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industry and there are industries that
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suitable for women like tourism. That makes
universities
should not accept equal
numbers of male and female students in every
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. It is
fairnessReplace the word
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because some industries require physical strength and that
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suitable for
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. As a
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,
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employers can not recruit the
people
they are looking for and that can
be increaseChange the verb form
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unemploymentCorrect article usage
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rate. In the
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, the acceptance of some
people
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create unfairness in
society
.
Consequently
, the student can choose the major that they wanted to and they should choose the major that they
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to.
In conclusion, I disagree with accepting an equal number of
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and
femaleFix the agreement mistake
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in every subject. I believe that if
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universityFix the agreement mistake
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with
fairness
and
equality
always go together, the world will be better.