You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter . describe the problem with the equipment . explain how this problem is affecting your work . say what you want the shop or company to do.

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Dear sir or Madam, I work as a Software Employee and work from home daily for our organisation. I received Laptop from our IT team a few months back, and it was functioning well until yesterday.

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morning, I tried to log in but couldn't do so. As you know, for every Software Employee, the workstation is the utmost important tool to perform the job.

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, I have many activities to execute and meetings to attend daily.

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, I Store an enormous amount of work-related data that I can't afford to lose at any cost. I cannot perform any day-to-day activities. So, I have decided to send my Laptop to the IT team by courier today. I request you find out what the problem is precisely and resolve it as soon as possible, as it is hampering my daily activities to perform. It would be helpful if you could send an alternate Laptop so I can be on track and not miss any important calls. I will be waiting for your reply. Thanks and Regards Niranjan Reddy K.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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