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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a plane to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Divya, It has been a long time since we talked. Hope you are doing well. I felt glad by hearing the news that you
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 got admission to my tertiary school. By writing
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 letter, I would like to share my views regarding your accommodation query. At starting of my master's, I was
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 confused to select the best place to live, but with the help of one of my uncle's friends, I could find it easily. He suggested to me that the not other places were better as compared to the
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 hostel as it has all the basic and opulent facilities. I advise you to select the location which is nearer to your
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 because buses are not frequent and it is always difficult to travel long distances. As well as, you should
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 contact the management department of the
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 for better guidance regarding it. Most students want to live in the suburbs and town centres, but they did not realize the drawbacks of living there.
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, the main problem is congestion which has always made the trouble to reach
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 on time.
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, due to much travelling one can not focus on studies because of stress. So, I suggest you should choose a place by thinking of every possible situation. Best of luck in advance and I will always be ready to help you. You can contact me any time whenever you need my help. Best regards, Saloni
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