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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

#students #focus #attention #school
Schools play an important role in the development of our brains. Nowadays a large number
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of students
 feel that it is hard to concentrate and they are not able to give their full attention in school. In
this
 essay, I will outline what is the potential reasons for
this
 particular problem and what we can do to resolve
this
. There is a lot of reasons that Student are not able to concentrate in school, the major reason is smartphone with social
media
. Obviously, when these kids use Smartphones they not only watch videos online but
also
 waste a lot of
time
 on social
media
.
As a result
, they lose their concentration which hinders their close attention.
for instance
, a study has concluded that everyone these days has problem with concentration cause they are spending a lot of
time
 in front of the mobile screen. Another reason is that nowadays these juveniles are very enthusiastic, they want to get everything in their life very early.
therefore
,
instead
 of living in present with
the
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 they waste their precious
time
 thinking about the future.
On the other hand
, to resolve these problems public and the government both should have to perform their duties
otherwise
 it will be a disaster for the student in future. To resolve
this
 problem parents need to keep eye on their kids and let them know that they should not spend their precious
time
 spending on scrolling Facebook and Instagram. government should work with these social
media
 companies and make some restrictions on using these platforms. In conclusion, despite the ubiquity of mobile phones, if parents and government take stick action against social
media
 applications they can do great care of their children and citizen.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distractions
  • focus
  • pay attention
  • lack of interest
  • motivation
  • fatigue
  • sleep
  • classroom environment
  • teaching methods
  • technology addiction
  • social media
  • peer pressure
  • workload
  • support
  • active learning strategies
  • engaging
  • student-centered teaching
  • realistic goals
  • rewards
  • balanced lifestyle
  • screen time
  • breaks
  • physical activity
  • support and guidance
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