The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reason.
Smoking in common places is becoming a big concern for different communities and many believe that authorities should pass a law to forbid smoke usage in shared areas.
However
, it limits an individual ‘s liberty. I entirely disagree with the mentioned statement and Linking Words
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essay highlights its upsides and drawbacks.
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To begin
with, it has been proved that the smoking business is playing a major role in economic growth and Linking Words
this
legislation could affect the Linking Words
overall
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For example
, In Iran close to 100 thousand jobs have been created in the tobacco industry and not only ordinary people are making a living in Linking Words
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also
the government benefits from taxpayers. Linking Words
Secondly
, smoking could make people more relaxed and relieve their stress immediately, Linking Words
therefore
, imposing a limitation policy will lead to smokers’ dissatisfaction and even the loss of their sense of belongingness to their country.
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On the other hand
, it is common knowledge that smoking is injurious to human health and the number of its ill effects will increase when someone uses it in a population. Numerous diseases Linking Words
such
as heart attack or lung cancer come and passive smokers are even more in danger rather than addicted ones. Linking Words
Moreover
, littering among smokers is common and governments should set a budget for collecting and recycling these types of trash. Linking Words
According to
an article published by Times magazine, The USA spend close to 1 million dollars annually to collect cigarette trash from parks.
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while
smoking in shared amenities brings dire consequences, the government may not introduce legislation to ban public area smoking Linking Words
due to
the fact that it declines economic growth and affects the quality of smokers living negatively.Linking Words
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