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Nowadays in many countries household waste food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that?How can this problem be solved?

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It is true that produced household waste reached
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an alarming rate in today's contemporary epoch. There are three main origins of
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 menace and a number of solutions
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 will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the major factor is that modern lifestyle has greatly contributed to the wastage and garbage. As people have become materialistic and we are living in a mass consumption society.Individuals not only use more things but
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 throw them after using them once. Another cause is that markets are flooded with cheap,
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 things, that are more in demand and looking attractive to consumers.
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, that has been well-packed by companies to sell their product at a reasonable price.
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,mostly plastic is used for packaging goods which
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 non-biodegradable
materials
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, that either
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 garbage or put
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 on the environment. Turning to the possible solutions, an obvious step would be
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 the aware public to use recycled products
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 of buying a new
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. Because
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 there are some people that are not conscious
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consequences
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 of their actions. A
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 remedy might be to impose a tax on food packaging companies, if they took
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 step it would deter them. Admittedly, authorities can enforce the
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strongest
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 laws for organizations for doing non-biodegradable packaging. What could be a better example than affluent countries like America? where the country was facing the problem of wastage, for the
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 decades
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, government impose a tax on food companies. In conclusion,
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 factors of modern lifestyle and less consciousness appear to be
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 causes, a coordinated response by the public and government may well lessen the severity of the situation.

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