You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him which team won Describe the weather conditions that day Say how you felt about the match Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

Dear Sam, Greetings of the day! I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good health. I am writing
this
letter to enquire about your injury and
also
to inform you of the
match
we played
last
week. The football
match
which was played during your absence was a closely contested one where we won just by a whisker.
In addition
to
this
, the weather was rainy and there were predictions of thunderstorms during the later periods of the evening. Despite
this
, we enjoyed the contest to the fullest, and every player contributed well to the team's victory. The
match
was heading for a draw, when in the
last
few moments of the game, Nick scored a goal that won the
match
for us. Overall, we missed you while we played the
match
and we wish you a speedy recovery due to the accident. We hope to see you soon on the football field in the right earnest. Warm regards, John
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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