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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

#countries #waste #materials #e #g #paper #glass #cans
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Nowadays, Recycling is a big
issue
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 around the world. In a few
countries
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, there is not sufficient recycling of useless
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materials
materails
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materials
 (e.g.
bottle
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, glass and plastic bags).
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this
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 should outline
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issue
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the issue
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 and
to
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find the resolutions.
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 with, there is
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several
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of
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 recycling
of
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waste
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materials
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.
firstly
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, lack of
awareness
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 in society is about recycling
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waste
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materials
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.
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,
people
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does
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 not aware
about
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 recycling different
waste
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 because they
didnot
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did not
 how to recycle the
waste
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materials
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.
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, the vast majority of Pakistan,
doesnot
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does not
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 know how to recycle
the
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bottle in
daily
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their daily
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lifestyle
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.My friend
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also
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donot
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do not
don't
not
 aware
about
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 recycling different
materials
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such
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 as plastic bottles.To sort it out, social media create
such
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 a program which
give
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awareness
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 about recycling and how important is recycling for
countries
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.
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, I would like to highlight some more issues which cause problems in the
countries
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.
Secondly
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, community do not give value to the recycling of
waste
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materials
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such
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 as paper and glass.
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,
people
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does
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 not worry about recycling which major problem in many
countries
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.
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, my family does not think about recycling
of
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waste
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materials
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. they
also
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does
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 not give more preference to
recycle
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recycling
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 thing in a better way. To fix
this
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issue
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, society should play
major
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a major
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 role in fixing
this
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issue
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. they tell
people
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about
abour
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about
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of
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waste
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materials
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.
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, In some
countries
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, there are not enough
recyclimg
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recycling
resource
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resources
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 for
waste
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materials
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such
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 as paper, glass,
plastic
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and plastic
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 bottles. I have
outline
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 some of
issues
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the issues
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 of recycling
of
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waste
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materials
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is
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due to
lack
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a lack
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 of
awareness
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 and
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people
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people's
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 less value to recycle
of
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waste
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materials
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.
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Also
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 give some resolution as well
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 as on social media
create
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 program
awareness
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 about
the
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recycling, but
also
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 society should tell
people
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 the worth of recycling
of
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waste
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materials
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