In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

Nowadays, Recycling is a big
issue
around the world. In a few
countries
, there is not sufficient recycling of useless
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materials
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materials
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, glass and plastic bags).
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and
to
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find the resolutions.
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with, there is
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several
issue
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recycling
of
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waste
materials
.
firstly
, lack of
awareness
in society is about recycling
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waste
materials
.
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,
people
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not aware
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recycling different
waste
because they
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how to recycle the
waste
materials
.
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, the vast majority of Pakistan,
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know how to recycle
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recycling different
materials
such
as plastic bottles.To sort it out, social media create
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awareness
about recycling and how important is recycling for
countries
.
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countries
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, community do not give value to the recycling of
waste
materials
such
as paper and glass.
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,
people
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not worry about recycling which major problem in many
countries
.
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, my family does not think about recycling
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. they
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not give more preference to
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thing in a better way. To fix
this
issue
, society should play
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role in fixing
this
issue
. they tell
people
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about
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about
the value of recycling
of
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waste
materials
.
Lastly
, In some
countries
, there are not enough
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recycling
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for
waste
materials
such
as paper, glass,
plastic
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and plastic
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bottles. I have
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some of
issues
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the issues
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of recycling
of
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waste
materials
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due to
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of
awareness
and
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less value to recycle
of
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waste
materials
.
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give some resolution as well
such
as on social media
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program
awareness
about
the
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recycling, but
also
society should tell
people
the worth of recycling
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waste
materials
.
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