The course director of your previous college has invited you to attend a party for new students, and he has also asked you to give a talk about studying overseas. You have an important examination on the same day so you cannot attend the party. Write a letter to the director to apologize and to explain why you cannot attend the event. Suggest another date when you could give your talk. How to Answe
Dear Mr Smith, I am extremely overwhelmed after receiving your letter regarding the
party, which will be held on 25th June 2022. I am
alsovery thankful to you for giving me
suchan amazing chance to meet newbies and give them small talk.
However, unfortunately, my MPhil final paper will be on the same day. That's why I am unable to attend the
party. I am writing
thisletter to apologize for not being able to be a part of
partyespecially organized for newcomers because of M.Phil exam is on the same
Moreover, I have to submit my final thesis paper on the exact same
datewhich includes a presentation as well. I am very sorry for
thisinconvenience, but if you move
datea little forward on 26 June 2022, I will surely attend the new student's
partyand will deliver a talk on overseas studies. If
dateis convenient for you please let me know at the same address above. I hope you will accept my apology. And I am
alsohoping that everyone one st the college is well. May your
partywill be a great success. Looking forward to
furtherhearing from you. Yours faithfully Maham Alvi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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