The course director of your previous college has invited you to attend a party for new students, and he has also asked you to give a talk about studying overseas. You have an important examination on the same day so you cannot attend the party. Write a letter to the director to apologize and to explain why you cannot attend the event. Suggest another date when you could give your talk. How to Answe

Dear Mr Smith, I am extremely overwhelmed after receiving your letter regarding the
, which will be held on 25th June 2022. I am
very thankful to you for giving me
an amazing chance to meet newbies and give them small talk.
, unfortunately, my MPhil final paper will be on the same day. That's why I am unable to attend the
. I am writing
letter to apologize for not being able to be a part of
especially organized for newcomers because of M.Phil exam is on the same
, I have to submit my final thesis paper on the exact same
which includes a presentation as well. I am very sorry for
inconvenience, but if you move
a little forward on 26 June 2022, I will surely attend the new student's
and will deliver a talk on overseas studies. If
is convenient for you please let me know at the same address above. I hope you will accept my apology. And I am
hoping that everyone one st the college is well. May your
will be a great success. Looking forward to
hearing from you. Yours faithfully Maham Alvi
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