Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, every family usually owns more than

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car, and naturally, when children in the family become of

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, they are eager to get their driver’s licences. Some

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believe that raising the minimum

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for driving a vehicle is the most effective way to prevent

accidents

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.

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I agree, that the

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increase could play a big part in reducing the number of car

accidents

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, I cannot fully support

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view because I believe that there are other equally important means that can be taken. On

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hand, increasing the minimum

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limit would actually decrease death and injuries. Young

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tend to get into

accidents

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because of their lack of responsibility, maturity, and experience.

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, the older

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are, the more experience they gain. It is obvious that older drivers deal with stressful and unexpected situations more calmly and find solutions to dangerous situations faster.

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, if there is a car crash in front of a young driver, he might be frightened and panic, meanwhile an older person might press the brakes or turn the steering wheel to avoid collision with other vehicles.

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, there are better measures that can help maintain road safety.

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of them is the government’s encouragement to use public transportation

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of private

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because that can help reduce traffic, which actually increases the possibility of dangerous situations on the streets. But

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authorities should invest more in improving public transport so it would be more appealing for the drivers. It is obvious that more

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would choose buses if they could see that it is a cheaper, faster and not

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an uncomfortable way to travel around the city as it seems. All in all, even though I agree that the raise of the legal

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for getting a

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licence would reduce the

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of

accidents

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on the roads, deaths, and injuries, I believe that there are other effective means that can help to deal with

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problem.