Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

think that the

government

should increase tax on junk

food

as a motivation

of

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people

to eat healthy

food

. In my opinion, if there is at least a minimal chance to get humans healthier, it should be tried.

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,

to grow

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tax

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taxes

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is an interesting approach to get

healthier

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a healthier

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nation in a long term.

In

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this

essay will be discussed an agreement with the approach.

First

of all, for a

person

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the climbing tax could help to become healthier.

Therefore

, the

person

will have more energy, motivation, and, probably, more time to do everything the

person

planned to do.

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, students would wish to study,

to

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earn scholarships, to get better grades and

knowledges

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knowledge

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.

Consequently

, to pass interviews better,

to

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apply

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get higher

occupation

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, and earn promotions faster. So, healthier

people

could work better, earn more money, live

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lifes

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lives

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they wish, and,

consequntly

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consequently

, help the

government

via

taxes

. On the other side, there is an advantage for the

government

.

For instance

, the

people

who do not want to be healthier and still wish to eat fast

food

whether

taxes

are

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increasing

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increating

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increasing

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or not, they will pay to the

government

making

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it better by

taxes

.

Accordingly

, the

government

will build a better infrastructure, schools, universities,

parks

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and parks

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,

allocate

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a budget to help families who need the support. To sum up,

people

would be healthier, the

government

would be

more rich

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, the nation will be happier and live longer

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lives

lifes

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with

huge

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range of emotions. Raced

taxes

should make a

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positive

possitive

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positive

reaction in the future for every

person

living in the country where

taxes

for

the

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apply

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fast

food

will be higher rather than

the

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apply

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healthy

food

.