Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The School schedule is full of different subjects. One type of them is undoubted, another has numerous questions. One of the
second
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
subject
is Physical Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
education
. Should Physical Education
be part of the school schedule?
On the one hand, Physical Education
ought to be part of education
, because of the mood of the class, students
have a chance to relax from boring and direful lessons
like math or biology. During PE
a student's brain is relaxing, so physical education
decreases the risk of students
burnout and reduces stress. Moreover
physical exercises are a source of the hormone of happiness called dopamine, so Physical Add a comma
,Moreover
education
lessons
make students
happier. School life is not only about academic knowledge, it is also
about having fun and being happy.
On the other hand
, PE
classes are useless and simply a waste of students
' time. Due to a busy student’s time schedule
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,schedule
PE
becomes an unnecessary burden, which declines students
leisure time.Change noun form
students'
student's
Furthermore
Add a comma
,Furthermore
instead
of studying necessary academic lessons
like chemistry, pupils waste their golden hours on unhelpful classes. Furthermore
, a significant number of people strongly believe that students
ought to be focused on their exam results, so all obstacles should be deleted including unnecessary subjects like Physical education
.
To sum up, in my opinion
true like always is in the middle, so Add the comma(s)
,opinion
PE
lessons
ought to be optional, not obligatory. Students
have to have an
option to study academic study or to relax and have fun at Change the article
the
PE
lessons
if they need that.Submitted by oimigle on
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