some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views.
In recent decades, some individuals think it is preferable that keeping their lives original and averting variation is a foremost way to be comfortable because
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,in
this
way, less energy
and time
is required while others suggest modification is positive on every occasion due to better brain function and increased happiness in life
. The reasons will be outlined in this
essay.
On the one hand, it is often argued that doing repetitive tasks
makes a person do it
better and more easily. Correct pronoun usage
them
Likewise
, many factories prefer to use their old methods to produce their products and avoid changing them. By the way of example, in the last
semester of the university, in the course of engineering economics, I learned that when something is repeated several times, after a while, less time
and energy
, also
, less money is needed for that work. Moreover
, sometimes this
time
and energy
even reach half of the initial amount.
On the other hand
, some believe that doing a variety of things can make the brain grow and prevent it from weakening. Besides
, doing repetitive tasks
makes life
dull. For instance
, researchers at Canada's McGill University in the year 2017 have shown that people who experience new things in life
not only have an average of 10% more life
expectancy but also
they due to their brains working more, in their old age, the possibility of getting Alzheimer's disease is much less.
In a nutshell, although
it takes less time
, energy
, and time
to do repetitive tasks
, doing new tasks
and challenges increases life
satisfaction and prevents poor brain function.Submitted by hadiseh77_98
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