Some people think that is a government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone in the community should take part in this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

After the recent global

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general

health

of the messes is largely discussed. According to some

people

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it is on the state to control the medical situation, while other believes it should stem from each individual. Both

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views have their own merits and demerits which will be analyzed in the upcoming subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand,

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policy makers

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can take

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steps,

firstly

, constructing more

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playgrounds

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play grounds

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playgrounds

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, jogging tracks or parks can help people to engage in extracurricular activities more,

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, the cost of the gym is not affordable for

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.

Secondly

, introducing

health

policies,

for example

,

Health

cards introduced by

government

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the government

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of Pakistan to help the underprivileged

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their medical assistance.

Thirdly

, eating habits are

also

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a major

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reason behind Obesity,

health

diseases and other joint issues,

therefore

governments should create

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awareness among people using print and electronic media to improve their habits.

Moreover

, try avoiding junk

foods

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food

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. On the other side, it is often said

health

is wealth an individual can work and earn more for his family

hence

they should be more careful regarding their

health

.

Additionally

, if everyone is doing their part root

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of any issue can be eliminated,

for example

, dengue is widely spreading all over the country if everyone will take the

preventionary

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prevention

measure i.e emptying the flower pot,

keeping

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the door and windows closed will significantly improve the scenario. In conclusion,

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of government cannot be overlooked as they are the

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controlling and implementing

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policies

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polices

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however

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,

responsibility

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the responsibility

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lies in the society no policy will be fruitful

otherwise

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