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,pandemic
health
of the messes is largely discussed. According to some Use synonyms
people
it is on the state to control the medical situation, while other believes it should stem from each individual. Both Add a comma
,people
the
views have their own merits and demerits which will be analyzed in the upcoming subsequent paragraphs.
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policymakers
policy makers
can take Correct your spelling
policymakers
few
steps, Correct article usage
a few
firstly
, constructing more Linking Words
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playgrounds
play grounds
, jogging tracks or parks can help people to engage in extracurricular activities more, Correct your spelling
playgrounds
for instance
, the cost of the gym is not affordable for Linking Words
majority
. Add an article
the majority
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, introducing Linking Words
health
policies, Use synonyms
for example
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Health
cards introduced by Use synonyms
government
of Pakistan to help the underprivileged Add an article
the government
for
their medical assistance. Change preposition
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Thirdly
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major
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a major
the major
health
diseases and other joint issues, Use synonyms
therefore
governments should create Linking Words
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awareness among people using print and electronic media to improve their habits. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, try avoiding junk Linking Words
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.
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health
is wealth an individual can work and earn more for his family Use synonyms
hence
they should be more careful regarding their Linking Words
health
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, if everyone is doing their part root Linking Words
case
of any issue can be eliminated, Correct your spelling
cause
for example
, dengue is widely spreading all over the country if everyone will take the Linking Words
preventionary
measure i.e emptying the flower pot, Correct your spelling
prevention
keeping
the door and windows closed will significantly improve the scenario.
In conclusion, Correct word choice
and keeping
role
of government cannot be overlooked as they are the Add an article
the role
one
controlling and implementing Correct pronoun usage
ones
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policies
polices
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policies
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however
, Add the comma(s)
,however
responsibility
lies in the society no policy will be fruitful Add an article
the responsibility
otherwise
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