nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have used to this. Explain the reason for this and discuss any possible effects in it may have on society.
The number of
nuclear
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the nuclear
a nuclear
family
is increasing Change to a plural noun
families
day
by day
worldwide, people
are migrating away from their family
for various reasons. There is no Fix the agreement mistake
families
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doubt
doudt
that, in Correct your spelling
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this
modern era, individuals are more focused on their carrier rather than their personal relationship
either with Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
the
family or friends, Change the word
their
as a
result
person's emotional bond with his family is decreasing Add the comma(s)
,result
day
by day
. Therefore
, in this
essay, I will illustrate about
the possible causes and effects of Change preposition
apply
this
development.
To begin
with, the key reason behind this
development is globalization, due to the
globalization, Correct article usage
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the
young adults are migrating far away from their roots, either for the ideal jobs or for the world-class education and settling down in Correct article usage
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other part
of the world away from their close Change the wording
another part
other parts
familiy
. Correct your spelling
family
As a
result
, after a while, they became so engaged with their own life, and loose closeness with their families. For instance
, there are lots of students who relocate from rural
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a rural
the rural
area
to metro Fix the agreement mistake
areas
cities
for
study, after finishing their university, maximum of them settled down Change preposition
to
in
either in those Change preposition
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cities
or travel to other big cities
because they have more options in contemporary cities
, as a
result
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,result
people
fail to keep close
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a close
relation
with their loved ones. Replace the word
relationships
Besides
, the other key reason is that
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the
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overuse
over use
of social media. Correct your spelling
overuse
the
social media and Correct article usage
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internet
are blocking Correct article usage
the internet
people
from developing strong
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a strong
bond
with others. Whereas youths are spending hours Fix the agreement mistake
bonds
in
social media, Change preposition
on
do
not even call or manage to meet their parents in person once in a while. Correct word choice
and do
Therefore
, this
behavior
of the young Change the spelling
behaviour
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generation
genaration
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generation
impacting
their personal attachments with guardians and siblings. Wrong verb form
impacts
Moreover
, tremendous work pressure, lack
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and lack
leasure
time are Correct your spelling
leisure
pleasure
also
quite important factors which effecting personal bonding.
There are numerous pitfalls of decreasing family bonding on
society, Change preposition
in
such
as, while parents are living alone without their children far away, children are also
impacted from
loneliness. Change preposition
by
As a
result
, mental Correct your spelling
issues
isssues
like depression, addictions and anxiety issues are Correct your spelling
issues
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aggravating
aggrevating
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aggravating
day
by day
which is not only causing burden
on Add an article
a burden
the
society but Correct article usage
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also
impacting health
care system of Correct article usage
the health
nation
. Add an article
the nation
a nation
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major impact of increasing social mobility is, local traditions and cultures are becoming absolute Change the wording
Another
as a
result
loacal
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local
buisnesses
are facing huge Correct your spelling
businesses
loss
, and local communities are Fix the agreement mistake
losses
affecting
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affected
from
the problem of unemployment and poverty.
To conclude, Change preposition
by
although
social mobility is inevitable, at the same time family bonding also
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is also
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important
importan
, it helps Correct your spelling
important
individual
to lead Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
a
happy life. Nowadays, technology and infrastructures made our life easier, regular family visit , meeting Correct article usage
apply
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through
throug
skype call, or keeping Correct your spelling
through
contacts
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contact
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through
throgh
regular phone call can help Correct your spelling
through
people
to maintain their relationship with family members.Submitted by ratnamalabej93 on
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