Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, public debate has been going on

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about whether

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physical education

classes

should be taught to all

classes

students

. Some people believe that it is essential to include physical studies

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children, whereas others believe that their time could be spent better-

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- on academic

activities

. There are quite a few benefits of exercising, especially doing it at a young age. It is evident that doing sports helps people to strengthen their physique, muscles,

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, but it

also

helps to clear your head and calm your mind. It is not a common practice in all families to go to the gym every week, or

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active leisure on their weekends, so including physical education

classes

in pupils’ school curriculums would show these families’ children the importance and benefits of exercising. It is essential that children from a young age should be taught

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advantages of physical

activities

.

In contrast

, some may claim that

students

should indulge more in academic subjects, not

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sports. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that

students

on some days have 8 hours of lessons, to oblige them to do physical

activities

after

such

a long day, would be simply inhumane. School

pupil’s

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pupils’

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main goal should be studying and getting good grades, any other

activities

should be left in their consideration and management of free time.

Students

already have a lot of academic duties,

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more

classes

to their curriculum might lead them to

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. On the basis of the above discussion, I believe that physical education

classes

should be arbitrary

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students

, not mandatory. If a child likes sports, they could go to after-school

classes

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football, but they should not be forced to do physical

activities

if they do not enjoy them.