Some think that private companies should pay for cleaning up pollution, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss and state your own opinion.

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It is often a burning discussion whether private
companies
or governments should be accused of
environment
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pollution
. In my opinion, it is wise to
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government
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responsible for reducing
environment
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pollution
. Below, I am going to explain why I feel that the ultimate liability for
pollution
belongs to
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the government
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. On the one hand, a
government
of a nation is the highest
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with the maximum authority. That allows
this
superior governing body to monitor & measure carbon footprint closely, more than anybody else.
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,
government
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can add Tax
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to giant corporations for abiding b the
carbone
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carbon
laws. They can
also
bann
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ban
use
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of particular materials which are harmful to the environment & animals. Ultimately, the
government
can take a holistic approach to restrict
pollution
.
In contrast
, it's very hard for private
companies
to work for a particular cause unitedly. After all,
private
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organization's
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prime
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purpose
pupose
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purpose
is to remain profitable in the
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log
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run.
Although
big corporations
does
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tons of CSR activities, their main motive is to create a sensible positioning
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among
amoung
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among
their customers by that.
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,
government
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can practice their legislative power & make private
companies
pay for their
pollution
indirectly. For the reasons I have outlined above, I
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believe
beleive
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believe
that it is
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point of concern to clean
pollution
. To reduce
pollution
, governments must act by communicating & co-ordinating with
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non-public
companies
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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