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Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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All the time we heard adult people
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that is
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the
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reading and
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 habits. But these habits are really important today?
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, in the past not
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 important if you know
read
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 or
writing
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, because people were more
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concerned
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 with working than studying. It is very probable that your grandparents have not finished
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high school or maybe they do not have a college degree. Even though they did not finish
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school or university, they had
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 and a big family. Now in modern society is really important to know read and
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, because all works in the world are
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 in a text that you need to read. It is for
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that is
 an obligation to put your children in a school and they need to know read and
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written
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 very well. In conclusion, in the past not
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 important if you did not know read or
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, because
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most of the work was physical. But now if you want to be something in your life, the
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minimum
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 that you need to know
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 and read. These are the two
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society. So if you have a child, you have to implant the habit of reading and
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