Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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From shopping
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to water bottles,
plastic
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is a necessary material for our society today. Since
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protocol was held in Japan more than 10 years ago, the number of nations that are trying to reduce the production of
plastic
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have
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increased. Especially many countries in
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the EU
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have succeeded to cut
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waste
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during
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recent years. Japan,
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, is one nation that still heavily
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on
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and hardly foresee a future without
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.
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essay is going to discuss
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the damage towards
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environment
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that
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triggered by
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in the
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half and will point out some ideas to solve
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problem in the latter half. The damage that
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caused
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causes
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to the
environment
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is enormous. One of the negative effects is the emission of dioxin when burnt. Not only
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dioxin is hazardous to our health but
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it will accumulate in our bodies. Managing
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waste
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is
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a serious problem
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Southeast Asia. Tons of plastics from China and Malaysia are thrown away illegally and end up floating in the ocean. Small
plastic
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waste
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will break down into pieces as the sunlight pours and these wastes will become microplastic. Small fish will
accidently
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accidentally
swallow these tiny fragments and end up accumulating microplastic. Since we are
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the top of the food chain, it is obvious that plastics that we throw away into the ocean will eventually influx into our
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bodies
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. It is very important to be able to stop
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action of contaminating the sea with
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. Despite that it is very difficult to get rid of
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in
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era, I believe that
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goal can be accomplished if the
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follow the
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two steps.
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, I believe that the
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should invest more
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to
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the companies that create materials to
product
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an alternative material that can be substituted by
plastic
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. Since
plastic
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bags
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are too convenient in Japan, it was hard to get rid of
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, but today it is not that rare to see a stone
bag
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.
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bag
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is a
bag
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that is
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made from stone, and
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is slightly heavier than a
plastic
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bag
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.
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, its’ resistance towards water is much better than paper so many people are thinking that
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would be the
plastic
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bags
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’ substitution. If the
government
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continues to invest
money
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, many companies are able to create new materials that can be an alternative option for
aplastic
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the aplastic
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bag
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bags
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.
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, allowing the
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to fine
plastic
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bags
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will help
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society to reduce
plastic
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waste
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. Five years ago, the Japanese
government
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allowed all supermarkets to charge
plastic
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bags
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to cut
plastic
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waste
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.
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turn out to be a success and reduced more than half of
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bag
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uses
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. Even though
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bags
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are convenient, customers rather use their own shopping
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bag
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bags
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because they do not want to pay
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fee
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. The damage to the
environment
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caused by
plastic
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is enormous and cannot be erased.
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, it can be alleviated by substituting
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to
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other materials.
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can achieve
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goal by investing more
money
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on
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this
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area or fining more
money
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. If these
movement
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have been acted, I believe that there will be less
plastic
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polluting the sea and
cleaner
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a cleaner
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environment
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will appear.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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