From shopping
to water bottles,
is a necessary material for our society today. Since
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protocol was held in Japan more than 10 years ago, the number of nations that are trying to reduce the production of
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increased. Especially many countries in
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have succeeded to cut
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recent years. Japan,
, is one nation that still heavily
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on
and hardly foresee a future without
.
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the damage towards
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that
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triggered by
in the
half and will point out some ideas to solve
problem in the latter half.
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to the
is enormous. One of the negative effects is the emission of dioxin when burnt. Not only
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dioxin is hazardous to our health but
it will accumulate in our bodies. Managing
is
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Southeast Asia. Tons of plastics from China and Malaysia are thrown away illegally and end up floating in the ocean. Small
will break down into pieces as the sunlight pours and these wastes will become microplastic. Small fish will
swallow these tiny fragments and end up accumulating microplastic. Since we are
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the top of the food chain, it is obvious that plastics that we throw away into the ocean will eventually influx into our
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. It is very important to be able to stop
action of contaminating the sea with
.
Despite that it is very difficult to get rid of
in
era, I believe that
goal can be accomplished if the
follow the
two steps.
, I believe that the
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the companies that create materials to
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an alternative material that can be substituted by
. Since
are too convenient in Japan, it was hard to get rid of
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, but today it is not that rare to see a stone
.
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is a
made from stone, and
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is slightly heavier than a
.
, its’ resistance towards water is much better than paper so many people are thinking that
would be the
’ substitution. If the
continues to invest
, many companies are able to create new materials that can be an alternative option for
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.
, allowing the
to fine
will help
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society to reduce
. Five years ago, the Japanese
allowed all supermarkets to charge
to cut
.
turn out to be a success and reduced more than half of
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. Even though
are convenient, customers rather use their own shopping
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because they do not want to pay
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.
The damage to the
caused by
is enormous and cannot be erased.
, it can be alleviated by substituting
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other materials.
can achieve
goal by investing more
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area or fining more
. If these
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have been acted, I believe that there will be less
polluting the sea and
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will appear.