Question: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, Good day! I am writing to show my interest in an advertised job by you. Professionally, I am a part-time experienced home-support staff and have been working locally in the town for the

last

5 years. I have worked in all areas as a home helper;

this

includes, cooking, cleaning, gardening, plumbing or any assigned task in-home services. During the summers, I would be off from college,

therefore

, I will have sufficient time to do additional part-time jobs and earn some extra bucks for my educational expenses.

Also

this

will certainly help me to learn from you as well, and I will be happy to provide my experienced services to you for any required task at your home. I would be available for 3-4 hours during the entire week as per your schedule,

however

, on Friday and ,Sunday I am unavailable due to my committed community services hours at our local town hall. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Haseeb Akhund

Submitted by haseebfakhund on Tue Oct 25 2022

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

174 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
Cultural immersion
Work ethic
Flexible schedule
Time management
Prior commitments
Punctuality
Reliability

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