In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In
this
new era, with the advancement of technology, some
people
think, in the new future newspapers and other traditional methods of reading will be diminished. Because all
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
people
Add an article
the people
show examples
will
Correct your spelling
access
acsess
Correct your spelling
access
free information
by
Change preposition
through
show examples
online apps. I agree with
this
statement and I will discuss my opinion.
To begin
with, there
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
some
profit
Fix the agreement mistake
profits
show examples
to
use
Wrong verb form
using
show examples
online methods in
Correct your spelling
comparison
comparation
Correct your spelling
comparison
with actual
books
.
Firstly
, online reading is
more
Add an article
a more
the more
show examples
suitable way to
Correct your spelling
receive
recieave
Correct your spelling
receive
news and information. To clarify, every
persons
Change to a singular noun
person
show examples
have a
Correct your spelling
smartphone
show examples
smart phone
Correct your spelling
smartphone
show examples
which contains a lot of applications
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
related
Add a missing verb
are related
show examples
to
get
Change the verb form
getting
show examples
news.
For instance
, with social media apps, like Telegram, Instagram, and Facebook you can get the newest news with just one click.
Secondly
, it provides a better
condition
Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
show examples
for
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
. Publishing
books
and newspapers
needs
Change the verb form
need
show examples
paper. Due to
this
fact, we have to make paper by cutting down
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
trees.
Consequently
, it is harmful
for
Change the preposition
to
show examples
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
. So, online reading can prevent
this
issue and improve
environmental
Add an article
the environmental
show examples
situation.
On the other hand
, some
people
have
tendency
Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
show examples
to actual
books
for some
reasons
Fix the agreement mistake
reason
show examples
.
Firstly
,
Correct your spelling
they
show examples
the
Correct your spelling
they
show examples
may love to have a
collaction
Correct your spelling
collection
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
their book
Correct your spelling
shelf
shelves
shelfs
Correct your spelling
shelves
show examples
. For
this
reason, they prefer to use the traditional one.
Secondly
, older adults
not
Add a missing verb
are not
show examples
interest in online
books
, because it is difficult for them to utilize new services and
adabt
Correct your spelling
adapt
debt
in the new era.
Consequently
, they are
Correct your spelling
continuing
countinuing
Correct your spelling
continuing
their habits without considering the changes
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
new
Add an article
the new
a new
show examples
world. To conclude
Add an article
an mt
the mt
show examples
Correct your spelling
my
show examples
mt
Correct your spelling
my
show examples
essay, it is no doubt
which
Correct word choice
that
show examples
technology is improving day by day, and every
actions
Fix the agreement mistake
action
show examples
and
habits
Change to a singular noun
habit
show examples
are replaced with
new
Add an article
the new
a new
show examples
method
Fix the agreement mistake
methods
show examples
. One of
this habitat
Fix the agreement mistake
these habitats
show examples
is reading. So, in my point of view, I have a common idea with some
people
who believe the old printed methods will be removed and online
Correct your spelling
reading
show examples
reding
Correct your spelling
reading
show examples
will be most popular In the future.
Consequently
, I agree with
this
opinion.
Submitted by parsafatahi1998 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
What to do next:
Look at other essays: