You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years.

Dear John, Regards For the
first
time I send you a big hug and I hope you and your family are very well in Malta, I know the time is a lot since we talk the
last
time but I never forget our friendship, sincerely I offer you an apology because I never call you again but the work and my family... you know.
This
letter is to give you more information about my situation, part of it is my intention to visit you in your city and live again that beautiful past moment, I really enjoy it because I want to see you once again, please confirm if you want too, meet with me or if you have any comment about my
visite
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, I want to travel with my wife and son, do you remember my wife? she´s so excited to meet your wife and go out to party in your beautiful country.  Only answer
this
letter if you agree with
this
idea.  Thank you.  You ever best friend Eduardo.
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