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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

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Uniforms are included in many companies for their employees and a lot of
people
 think
that is
 good for them. In my opinion, I agree with
this
 issue because it can present the identity of the organization.
Moreover
, it can decrease the economic' gap because they do not need to display their type of clothes. The uniform can represent the organization's characteristics and identity.
For example
,
people
 will know immediately when they see what the company is. So it can recognize
people
 to remember them rapidly.
For instance
, when we see the red coat and red skirt of one airline, we will recall right away what is the name of that airline.
In addition
, a dress code can create
a
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unity and harmony in the organization because every
people
 dresses in the same costume.
Therefore
, they do not need to find an expensive dress for wearing.
This
 can help
people
 to diminish the gap in the economy because each
people
 might have their own paying problems.
Furthermore
, because of unnecessary
for
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buying themselves's clothes so they will have enough money to spend on something more crucial than
the
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extravagant clothes. In conclusion, I totally agree with we should have a uniform for the employees because it can represent the company's outlook and decrease the gap between
people
's classes. So
this
 can create
harmonious
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 and help
people
 to save their money.
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