The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The tables above illustrate the number of
sales
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of Fairtrade-categorized coffee and banana in five countries in Europe in the years 1999 and 2004. The numbers are described in millions of
euros
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.
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, all countries in 2004 had a much greater amount of coffee and banana
sales
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compared to
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in 1999, except for Denmark and Sweden which recorded drops in banana
sales
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. In terms of coffee
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, The British spent 1.5
million
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euros
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in 1999,
however
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,
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number jumped to 20
million
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in 2004 making The UK by far the highest among the five nations. Meanwhile, The Swiss spent the greatest amount in 1999 which doubled from 3 to 6
million
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across the five years. Figures for Denmark, Belgium and Sweden were low as opposed to The UK and Switzerland. Denmark and Sweden showed a slight increase in 2004, moving from 1.8 to 2 and .8 to 1
million
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respectively.
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, Belgium had a little increase from 1 to 1.7
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. Regarding buying Fairtrade bananas, Switzerland occupied
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first place in both 1999 and 2004, rising from 15 to 47
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euros
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,
while
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UK and Belgium only went up by a little portion, growing from 1 to 5.5 and .6 to 4
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euros
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in the same order.
On the other hand
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, Dutch and
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Swedish showed
a different pattern, where the figures decreased during the five-year period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, euros, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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