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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I definitely agree with the notion that individuals should
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 their careers at least once in life. A number of arguments surround my opinion.
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 there are some strong benefits that can come from
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 development.
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 of the major
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 of changing careers
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 money. People may make more per year than they did with their previous
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 brings the opportunity to learn new skills. They will have to learn new actions and meet new expectations.
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 the change will be beneficial in the future. What is more, those who have a wide range of careers under their belt will have more
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 security in the long run.
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 path, a person can be proficient with two or even more. If he loses his
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, he can seek out jobs in different career fields, as opposed to
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 are greater than those who have simply held
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, a
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 is good for breaking the monotony. It is psychologically true that whenever a person takes his first
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, he is usually excited about it; but over the
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 of time, his interest wanes and soon he begins to suffer from excruciating boredom. A
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 shift fills him with new excitement that propels him into working with renewed interest and enthusiasm.
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 has many benefits and
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 should shift
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 at least once in life if not more times.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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