Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I definitely agree with the notion that individuals should
switch
their careers at least once in life. A number of arguments surround my opinion. To begin
with
there are some strong benefits that can come from Add a comma
with,
a
Correct article usage
apply
course
development. One
of the major benefit
of changing careers Change to a plural noun
benefits
are
money. People may make more per year than they did with their previous Change the verb form
is
work
. This
can help to lessen the financial burden of an individual or family. Secondly
, a course
switch
brings the opportunity to learn new skills. They will have to learn new actions and meet new expectations. This
general education is formed through a course
the change will be beneficial in the future. What is more, those who have a wide range of careers under their belt will have more work
security in the long run. Instead
of being proficient at one
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one-course
course
path, a person can be proficient with two or even more. If he loses his work
, he can seek out jobs in different career fields, as opposed to one
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one-course
course
field. Therefore
, his chances of landing a new work
are greater than those who have simply held one
course
. Finally
, a course
switch
is good for breaking the monotony. It is psychologically true that whenever a person takes his first work
, he is usually excited about it; but over the course
of time, his interest wanes and soon he begins to suffer from excruciating boredom. A course
shift fills him with new excitement that propels him into working with renewed interest and enthusiasm. To conclude
, I would like to reiterate my opinion that a course
switch
has many benefits and instead
of sticking to one
,job one
should shift course
at least once in life if not more times.Submitted by kenetic001 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
