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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congesstion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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The dominant reason behind
this
 is a growth in the number of vehicles. Several residents of a metropolis have at least one automobile or more, and for great bread and ,butter people are choosing to live inside the metro places. Not only it increased the city population but
also
 count of vehicles on road.
For instance
, in Delhi, individuals are coming from all over India to eighter work or study and they bring a car or bike with them.
Besides
this
, the bad infrastructure of the roads has been causing lots of congestion, it has been seen that the width of the road is not good enough to handle the traffic. Because that made it difficult to pass any vehicle.
Therefore
, the more vehicles on the road, the great traffic will increase. are there any solutions to reduce the transit jams? Certainly, there are a few resolutions to it, primarily, individuals should opt for public transportation
instead
 of a personal vehicle. Every city has its own public transit busses and great bus stops where passengers could pick those buses to travel.
For example
, in Canada, each province has their own public transport for its people and they
also
 provide bus passes to their travellers, most of the students and workers have been using Canadian public bus
as a result
 they have less traffic on the roads.
Furthermore
, decide the day for a vehicle to run on day alternatively. The Government could impose the rule that an even figure of transport will run for a few days and an odd figure on other days.
For example
, in India, the state government of Delhi had imposed the rule that an even number of cars were running on Monday, Wednesday and Friday and an odd one on the remaining days.
As a result
, lots of jams were get resolved and helped to travel fast to any place in the metropolis.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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