You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter in regard to the advert published in TBT magazine that, you are looking for a babysitter for your child. My name is pooja and I would like like to apply for

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vacancy .

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of all , I was working as a teacher in a primary school in India for almost 10 years and used to look after children after school at day boarding and I have pretty good experience of taking care of toddlers and teenagers. So I hope I will be a suitable person for

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job as I can help your children with their studies as well. As my kids are grown up now and busy with their studies and job , I spent most of the time sitting at home or in the library. sometimes , I

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go out for a walk with my friends but

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want to utilize my time in a better way. As I was already worked in

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field and am

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passionate about

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I can choose

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carrier in Australia

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. I have attached my resume for reference and I hope to hear from you back soon. Yours faithfully Pooja Raikwar

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Wed Oct 26 2022

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Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

202 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

advertisement
live with
look after
six-year-old child
suitable
employ
free time
Australia

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The Greeting

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is difficult for people living in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions can be taken to solve the problem? (Health)