Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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companies

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and the reasons people may prefer them over small ones. Big

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companies

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have always been dominating the market,nowadays more than ever. The reason for

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is that they can afford to invest a lot of money into marketing and promoting their

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can lead to a common misconception that big

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products

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are better than small

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ones. On the other ,hand the human brain is programmed in

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a way that it is more likely to gravitate to a so-called “as seen in tv product” .The truth is that often these mass-produced items have bad quality.Big associations are the reason thousands of small

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go bankrupt every year, and

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a problem we have to solve.

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problem can be resolved in a couple of ways.

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of all the government needs to raise taxes for the large capital associations,

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will lead to a rise in product prices and make it easier for small businesses to compete.

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small company

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should have a place on the shelves of big stores so that they are easily accessible by the average consumer.We should

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find a way to demonstrate that these

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are better and more quality because they are not mass-produced. The battle against these big

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will be hard, but I think with a lot of effort we can save these small businesses.Meaning we are better off without them.In y opinion,the conclusion is nice.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Your opinion

Production levels of the main fuels in the UK 1981 between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that the most important aim of science is it improve the people's lives. What extend do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The advantageof owning a smartphone to search within a specific website outweigh the disadvantage of affecting on people's health unless people can reduce time using it.

In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?