Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

In
this
,essay we will talk about large
business
companies
and the reasons people may prefer them over small ones. Big
business
companies
have always been dominating the market,nowadays more than ever. The reason for
this
is that they can afford to invest a lot of money into marketing and promoting their
products
.
This
however
can lead to a common misconception that big
business
products
are better than small
business
ones. On the other ,hand the human brain is programmed in
such
a way that it is more likely to gravitate to a so-called “as seen in tv product” .The truth is that often these mass-produced items have bad quality.Big associations are the reason thousands of small
companies
go bankrupt every year, and
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this is
a problem we have to solve.
This
problem can be resolved in a couple of ways.
First
of all the government needs to raise taxes for the large capital associations,
this
will lead to a rise in product prices and make it easier for small businesses to compete.
Second
small company
products
should have a place on the shelves of big stores so that they are easily accessible by the average consumer.We should
also
find a way to demonstrate that these
products
are better and more quality because they are not mass-produced. The battle against these big
companies
will be hard, but I think with a lot of effort we can save these small businesses.Meaning we are better off without them.In y opinion,the conclusion is nice.
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  • over-reliance
  • disrupts
  • entrepreneurship
  • economic diversity
  • monopolistic
  • financial power
  • homogenization
  • awareness campaigns
  • tax incentives
  • sustainability
  • artisan
  • eco-friendly
  • dominate
  • innovation
  • stifle
  • richness
  • cultures
  • traditions
  • highlighting
  • distinguish
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