Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that an international
organization
should be responsible for tackling environmental
problems
, but each national
government
. I totally disagree with
this
view. In my opinion, it is unreasonable to argue that national governments would not responsible for solving environmental
problems
. I do not believe that
this
mission is only for
international
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an international
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organization
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organizations
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. Normally, the national
government
must play a key role in planning and resolving environmental pollution in their country as it is the
government
that fully
acknowledge
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a
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hot potato and entirely eradicate them.
Furthermore
, most
countries
usually allocate the annual budget to
environment
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the environment
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section, so
this
lay the foundation for solving the problem effectively.
On the other hand
, I believe that we could not only rely on an international
organization
to deal with their own issues as there are some limitations.
Firstly
, an international
organization
sometimes could not reach any
problems
because of
territorial
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the territorial
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sovereignty
issue
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issues
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.
In other words
, an international
organization
is not allowed to interfere
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domestic affairs of each country without permission, and
this
would not grant elevated privileges to an international
organization
to solve an environmental problem as a whole.
In addition
, an international
organization
falls short of meeting all
countries
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country's
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needs owing to limited financial resources. Because the financial foundation of an international
organization
, in nature, is created by domination from a ton of
countries
. In conclusion, I believe that environmental
problem
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problems
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should not be a mission for the only international
organization
;
instead
, the challenges should be shared with both related international organizations and national governments.
For example
, the priority of developing
countries
is
reduce
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air pollution caused by industrial activities or use electric vehicles to protect the
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environment
enviroment
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environment
.
On the other hand
, environmental issues are the responsibility of international organizations. Because environmental
problems
in
countries
are closely related so national coordination and action
is
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necessary. So rich
countries
should provide financial and technological support to less developed
countries
in
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facing
environment
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problems
.
For example
, developed
countries
support electric vehicles or suggest reasonable environmental protection methods to other
countries
. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the opinion that solving
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environmental
environment
enviroment
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environmental
problems
should be the responsibility of international
organization
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organizations
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rather than each national
government
. It must be the duty of all people living on
the
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Earth to protect our planet.
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