Parents should not force children to learn a foreign language.To what extend do you agree with the statement. Many children learn a foreign language out of their own interests and many learn because, their parents force them to. In this essey, it will be consider force a child to learn a foreign language.

Many
children
learn a foreign
language
out of their own interests and many learn because
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their
parents
force them to. In
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, it will
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force
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a
child
to learn a foreign
language
. If
parents
do not force their
children
not only to learn a foreign
language
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but
also
to choose another profession, they may be distracted by unless and ineffective
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In addition
,
parents
know that learning a foreign
language
is effective for their
children
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, it helps to
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besides
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realize, it is
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for in their life.
Parents
should take into account the interest of their
child
because
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if the
child
does not know the inclination to the
language
or job chosen by the
parents
. The
child
will not
enjoy
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. If every
language
learner does not enjoy the
language
they are learning, there will be no growth. In conclusion, both are useful
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, it is better to teach
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children
in their own way because
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they
likes
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to read what they learn and it is beneficial.
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