In some countries, parents expect children to spend a long time studying in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children?

In some countries, parents expect children to spend a long

time

studying in and after

school

and have less free

time

. Of course, parents always want

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best

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their children. In my opinion,

this

has both positive and negative effects on children, both positive and negative. The more

time

you learn, the more knowledge you gain.

This

is the only positive effect. Studying at

school

gives you knowledge

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different subjects

such

as maths, literature, science,

chemistry

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and chemistry

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. After

school

, you attend other classes in different academic

centers

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to

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study more

. Coming home, you have to do a lot of

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exercise

exersise

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exercise

,

homework

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and homework

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to practice and

then

you will get high

scores

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the exams. It’s a common fact in Vietnam and other Asia countries. According to

researches

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in 2022, 60% of students in Asia attend classes after

school

. When the students in the research are asked why they attended these classes, they said they were preparing for their exams or studying before their lessons at

school

. As

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a result

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a result

, they

don’t

have to study much in

school

and get high

scores

. High

scores

make parents happy.

First

, nothing is free, we have to spend a lot of

time

on

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studying.

Therefore

, we will have less free

time

or

time

for

ourself

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ourselves

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. That makes our health weaker, both mental and physical. About the

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physical

phyiscal

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physical

, we will get more ills because we

don’t

do enough sports or exercises. We will get tired when we go to

school

, so we won’t get quality lessons and the

scores

may be lower. About the mental, because you have been taught and you have learnt the

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lessons

lesson

lessosn

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lesson

before going to

school

, you will think that your teachers are boring and have bad

behaviours

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behaviour

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towards

to

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them. For that, you should remember one thing, you can be more intelligent than some

of

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others

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;

however

, there are more people better than you.

Moreover

, a lot of people in the world are still poor and

don’t

have enough money to go to

school

.

Second

, you will lack

of

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social skills. Because of spending too much

time

on

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studying, you will spend less

time

on communication, even with your

families

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family

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. You

don’t

know how to behave correctly. They said:”

First

is

obedient

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,

Second

is knowledge” , you should balance

time

of studying and

realxing

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relaxing

. In

shorts

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, studying is good, you can spend

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a lot of

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time

on it.

However

, everything has two faces, so remember to balance your schedule.