Introduction
Technology is growing day by day so
habits
and daily routines of Correct article usage
the habits
people
change fastly when comparing the past. Use synonyms
Transportation
is much easier with the technology and it is Use synonyms
also
more comfortable. Nowadays, Linking Words
people
prefer Use synonyms
car
as Correct article usage
the car
a
Remove the article
apply
transportation
to go to work. Absolutely, I Use synonyms
agree
Add the preposition
onagree
toagree
withagree
the
arriving somewhere Correct your spelling
that
with
driving is more comfortable and funnier for most Correct word choice
while
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
. But the Use synonyms
traffic
problems are getting increase because of the increasing individual driving rate. Use synonyms
Traffic
is becoming more congested and exerting Use synonyms
as
a negative impact on the environment through Change preposition
apply
noise
and air pollution since a spike in the number of personal cars owned. Add an article
the noise
Consequently
, to curb Linking Words
this
important issue, many Linking Words
individuals
suggest that the price of fuels should be soared. Use synonyms
However
, I disagree with Linking Words
this
idea, as it may bring forth devastating consequences for the economy and it's not easy for enforcing Linking Words
this
hard rule.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
Recently,
individuals
generally don’t prefer to Use synonyms
use
public Use synonyms
transportation
since it is uncomfortable and it Use synonyms
cause
Change the verb form
causes
spends
much more time than Correct subject-verb agreement
spend
individuals
Use synonyms
Fix the infinitive
to drive
drive
. If Wrong verb form
driving
gas
prices rise, many Use synonyms
people
have to Use synonyms
use
public Use synonyms
transportation
. When I’m thinking Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
rise, if Change preposition
about this
this
method will be happing, Linking Words
Use synonyms
traffic
Correct article usage
the traffic
problem
seems to solve and Use synonyms
also
seems to Linking Words
Linking Words
this
solve the air pollution Correct pronoun usage
apply
problem
from vehicles. From my point of view, Use synonyms
this
method may restrict the Linking Words
use
of cars for-long distance travel, but it can be Use synonyms
also
ineffective in reducing the Linking Words
use
of cars in cities and for short-distance travel. Use synonyms
This
strategy only solves Linking Words
Add a hyphen
long-distance
long distance
Add a hyphen
long-distance
traffic
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
such
as two cities far apart. When Linking Words
look
the Change the verb form
looking
solve
Replace the word
solution
in
an expanded perspective, the Change preposition
from
problem
will not be resolved entirely. Use synonyms
Additionally
, raising the price of fossil Linking Words
gas
is an illogically silly assumption as it would spark societal unrest. Let me explain, not only Use synonyms
Use synonyms
individuals
Add a missing verb
do individuals
use
Use synonyms
gas
for Use synonyms
transportation
but Use synonyms
also
companies and farmers Linking Words
use
Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
gas
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both
Change preposition
for both
transportation
and production. Use synonyms
For instance
, a farmer has to Linking Words
use
Use synonyms
gas
for Use synonyms
doing
agriculture with different agriculture machines so the farmer produces vegetables and fruits much more expensive. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, these vegetables and fruits have Linking Words
been come
from Change to the active voice
come
the
far villages or Correct article usage
apply
another
far Correct quantifier usage
other
country
so shipping costs will Fix the agreement mistake
countries
be
rise for Unnecessary verb
apply
supply
chain. Add an article
the supply
As a result
Linking Words
of
, Change preposition
apply
people
who live in cities have to pay much more money to meet basic food needs. In substance, consumers have to pay more for food like meat and vegetables because of rising Use synonyms
gas
and Use synonyms
this
thoroughly can affect the economy.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
For
this
reason, Linking Words
firstly
, the government should promote public Linking Words
transportation
Use synonyms
such
as buses, electric automobiles, and bicycles among citizens rather than elevating the price of petroleum. Linking Words
Secondly
, governments should support Linking Words
about
tax Change preposition
apply
deduction
Fix the agreement mistake
deductions
to
Change preposition
for
people
who prefer public Use synonyms
transportation
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
Traffic
lights system can turn into Correct article usage
the Traffic
artificial
intelligence Correct article usage
an artificial
system
so Fix the agreement mistake
systems
for instance
Linking Words
like
adaptive signal technology can adjust the amount of time for a green light and red light in a particular signal based on real-time Change preposition
apply
traffic
monitoring.Use synonyms
Conclusion
To sum up, increasing
gas
prices have various drawbacks, including affecting Use synonyms
economic
situation and escalating Add an article
the economic
cost
of goods Correct article usage
the cost
and
Correct word choice
apply
also
buying some basic needs would be hard. The government should promote the Linking Words
use
of environmentally-friendly forms of transport Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
electrical
Replace the word
electric
vehicle
and give information about the Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
consume
habit of humanity on how Change the verb form
consuming
Add the particle
to effect
effect
our world.Replace the word
effective