Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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and daily routines of

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is much easier with the technology and it is

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more comfortable. Nowadays,

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prefer

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driving is more comfortable and funnier for most

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. But the

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problems are getting increase because of the increasing individual driving rate.

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is becoming more congested and exerting

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a negative impact on the environment through

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and air pollution since a spike in the number of personal cars owned.

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, to curb

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important issue, many

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suggest that the price of fuels should be soared.

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, I disagree with

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idea, as it may bring forth devastating consequences for the economy and it's not easy for enforcing

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generally don’t prefer to

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since it is uncomfortable and it

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much more time than

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. If

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prices rise, many

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have to

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seems to solve and

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solve the air pollution

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from vehicles. From my point of view,

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method may restrict the

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of cars for-long distance travel, but it can be

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ineffective in reducing the

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of cars in cities and for short-distance travel.

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strategy only solves

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long distance

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as two cities far apart. When

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in

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an expanded perspective, the

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will not be resolved entirely.

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, raising the price of fossil

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is an illogically silly assumption as it would spark societal unrest. Let me explain, not only

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use

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gas

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for

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but

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companies and farmers

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for both

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and production.

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, a farmer has to

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gas

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for

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agriculture with different agriculture machines so the farmer produces vegetables and fruits much more expensive.

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, these vegetables and fruits have

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far villages or

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far

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so shipping costs will

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rise for

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chain.

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of

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,

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who live in cities have to pay much more money to meet basic food needs. In substance, consumers have to pay more for food like meat and vegetables because of rising

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and

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thoroughly can affect the economy. For

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reason,

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, the government should promote public

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as buses, electric automobiles, and bicycles among citizens rather than elevating the price of petroleum.

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, governments should support

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to

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people

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who prefer public

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.

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lights system can turn into

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intelligence

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adaptive signal technology can adjust the amount of time for a green light and red light in a particular signal based on real-time

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monitoring. To sum up, increasing

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prices have various drawbacks, including affecting

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situation and escalating

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of goods

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buying some basic needs would be hard. The government should promote the

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of environmentally-friendly forms of transport

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as

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vehicle

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and give information about the

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habit of humanity on how

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our world.