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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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According to some, having the same teacher for a few years for a student is an advantage.
However
, others believe that changing the different
teachers
 every
year
 is better for
students
.
As
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 my point of view, having different
teachers
 for each
year
 is better for the
students
 and more beneficial for them. I believe every teacher has their own ways and different methods to teach their pupils.
Therefore
,
students
 would have the benefit to learn various types from their new
teachers
.
Instead
 of sticking with the same way of learning for a period of time.
Moreover
, different
students
 have
a different levels
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 of adaption in their studies.
For instance
, most experienced
teachers
 know very well about the level of IQ of their pupils. So that they can find the easiest way to teach them. Another point to consider is that everyone has their own specific skill and ability. So that
students
 could learn
variety
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 of skills and knowledge from their new
teachers
 every
year
. In conclusion, the better way for
students
 is to get a chance to study with new
teachers
 each
year
.
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