some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is an

on-going

Correct your spelling

ongoing

show examples

debate among people

how

Change preposition

on how

show examples

to decide the level of

punishment

Use synonyms

for each criminal case. Some believe that

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

we should give the same

punishment

Use synonyms

to

specific

Add an article

a specific

the specific

show examples

type

Fix the agreement mistake

types

show examples

of

crime

Use synonyms

committed regardless of the

circumstancial

Correct your spelling

circumstantial

background. Others think that we should always consider the

motivation

Use synonyms

behind the

Correct your spelling

crime

cirme

Correct your spelling

crime

and differentiate the level of

punishment

Use synonyms

based on that. Each side

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

its say,

however

Linking Words

, I believe we need to look into the

motivation

Use synonyms

when we decide the level of

punishment

Use synonyms

as depends on the cause of the

crime

Use synonyms

the meaning of the committed

crime

Use synonyms

becomes significantly different. The

first

Linking Words

view set a rule to give the criminals

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

punishment

Use synonyms

for

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

types of

crime

Use synonyms

without considering the

motivation

Use synonyms

, and by

this

Linking Words

,

judgement

Use synonyms

becomes quite simple and straightforward.

For example

Linking Words

, we give the same sentence to those

committed

Correct pronoun usage

who committed

show examples

robbery for a certain amount of valuable items. We sentence

same

Correct article usage

the same

show examples

year in prison for

Correct article usage

the murders

show examples

murders

Fix the agreement mistake

murder

show examples

of one person. The

judgement

Use synonyms

is easy, objective and without prejudice. On the

contrarily

Add a comma

,contrarily

show examples

the

second

Linking Words

view

take

Change the verb form

takes

show examples

a

Correct your spelling

different

differet

Correct your spelling

different

approach. A murder from personal

rancor

Change the spelling

rancour

show examples

should be considered differently from a murder to protect oneself from an assault. The

judgement

Use synonyms

can be prone to be subjective and

circumstancial

Correct your spelling

circumstantial

,

nevertheless

Linking Words

, the

motivation

Use synonyms

needs attention

for

Change preposition

from

show examples

a justice point of view. Considering the above two views, I believe the latter is better from

justice

Correct article usage

a justice

show examples

and humanity point of

views

Fix the agreement mistake

view

show examples

. People should be punished not only

the

Change preposition

for the

show examples

type of

crime

Use synonyms

they committed but

also

Linking Words

from

Change preposition

for

show examples

the reason why they committed it. Without that observation, we cannot give fair

judgement

Use synonyms

to the criminals who had

legitimate

Add an article

a legitimate

show examples

reason

Fix the agreement mistake

reasons

show examples

to commit it.