Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are
companies
that think their workers should follow the office dress code during Use synonyms
work
. While others think that clothing is not related Use synonyms
with
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to
efficiency
of Add an article
the efficiency
an efficiency
work
, Use synonyms
therefore
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people
should wear whatever they like. In my point of view, the approach can be different depending on a specific Use synonyms
company
and type of Use synonyms
work
.
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First
argument I want to mention is that management can think that their employees are the face of the organization, that’s why they should wear a suit and look good. In Change the article
The first
such
industries as finance and banking Linking Words
people
definitely should wear good clothes and look smart for business meetings, it is the way to represent the values and reputation of a Use synonyms
company
. Use synonyms
For
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example
, Use synonyms
people
in Sberbank always wear suits in offices, sometimes even Use synonyms
they
wear green ties - in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
color
palette of the brand. Change the spelling
colour
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Second
argument is that Change the article
The second
people
in some Use synonyms
companies
should look unified. It’s important to identify Use synonyms
people
of the specific profession, Use synonyms
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moreover
their outfit has a functional necessity, not only decorative. Add a comma
,moreover
For
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example
, firemen should wear special Use synonyms
Add a hyphen
fire-resistant
fire resistant
suits because they need them to be safe.
Other Add a hyphen
fire-resistant
companies
think the other way. Use synonyms
Companies
with creative types of Use synonyms
work
don’t need their team to be suited, they need them to Use synonyms
work
properly. In IT Use synonyms
companies
or Marketing agencies Use synonyms
people
don’t usually represent their Use synonyms
company
in business meetings, they just Use synonyms
work
in the office. Use synonyms
For
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example
, Use synonyms
people
in Google can wear whatever they want, even Use synonyms
pajamas
until they are doing well with their tasks. Another situation when a smart dress code is not needed is when Change the spelling
pyjamas
people
try to optimize their Use synonyms
time
and spend it on creating some sort of outfit. Use synonyms
This
applies especially to IT Linking Words
companies
again, directors or CEOs creating a minimalist wardrobe to save Use synonyms
time
. A good Use synonyms
example
is Steeve Jobs who wore just blue jeans, white sneakers and Use synonyms
black
Correct article usage
a black
turtleneck
and it even became a famous outfit that Fix the agreement mistake
turtlenecks
people
are trying to recreate.
In conclusion, organizations can create specifications for their workers to wear specific types of clothes if they represent an image of a Use synonyms
company
or if it's needed in their specific profession. Others don’t need it because of the creative and free Use synonyms
work
atmosphere Use synonyms
of
just to save Change preposition
apply
time
from not doing smart looks every Use synonyms
time
. I think both ways can be relevant for a specific Use synonyms
company
and depends on Use synonyms
type
of Add an article
the type
work
.Use synonyms
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