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Some people believe that children should spend their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides and say which side you personally support.

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Some individuals think that
children
 should be allowed to spend their leisure time with their
parents
 while other people believe it is unnecessary and can be detrimental. I think, that offspring staying with their families will benefit them better than spending their time outside.
This
 essay will discuss both of these views. The proponent of the view that young ones shouldn't spend their free time with their loved ones because it is not necessary and can be detrimental might think so because they believe that most
parents
 pamper their kids to the extent that they could not stand on their own in the future for ,instance most notorious teenagers out there are attributed
as a result
 of pampering from their family members when they were little and has become a social nuisance in the community now.
Secondly
, they believe that
children
 get to grow and mature quickly without their
parents
 because most orphans tend to adapt faster to the environment and become responsible adults at a young age better than those who had family members to cater for them.
On the other hand
, there are so many benefits of allowing
children
 to stay with their families which include learning how to love others.
For example
, a well-groomed child learns to love people in the house and transfers them to others they meet outside by sharing their snacks with other pupils in the class, and being empathetic when someone injures themselves in their presence. I support
this
 view because loved ones nurture their own by teaching them good morals to implement in society.
Hence
 it is essential for kids to spend some moments with their
parents
. In conclusion,
Although
 some
children
 without their family's support tend to grow quickly and become responsible adults at a young age, those who stay with their
parents
also
 learn morals and love to share with the community which is a good thing for society.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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