You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Ramesh, I am one of your tenants currently residing in Building no. 85, Friends Street, Faridkot. I am writing

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letter to inform you that some of the furniture in our apartment is not in a condition to be used and have become obsolete with time.

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, the sofa set in the living room is damaged and yesterday one of our guests fall down from the same as the cushioning and the wood got cracked.

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, the dining table

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has open cuts at the edges which is risky for children to use.

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, I request you to replace our sofa and dining table as soon as possible. I am aware of some dealers who can take old items in exchange for new products or you may sell these items to rag pickers. We can discuss the rental and other things once you confirm your decision to change these items. Yours faithfully, Sneha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rented accommodation
Tenancy
Malfunctioning
Worn-out
Broken
Inconvenience
Repair or replace
Urgency
Comfort
Safety
Budget
Specific property
Immediate action
Inadequate condition

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