Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others believe that universities must accept student of all ages regardless their previous grades. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few
individuals
argue that territory education
need
to be given Change the verb form
needs
for
the ones who have top score while others opine that college Change preposition
to
have
to consider all the people applying for the studies no matter their age or even their past grades. Change the verb form
has
Although
,
these perspectives are different I support the former statement which I will depict in the following essays along with my opinion in the Remove the comma
apply
last
.
To begin
with, once the criteria for getting seat
in the university is raisedAdd an article
a seat
up
, according to the marks it can pave Change preposition
apply
way
towards Add an article
the way
quality
of Add an article
the quality
education
. Because only the ones who are interested in studying will be present in the college hence
teaching them won’t be a concern similarly
, it can even help the companies to choose the individuals
for jobs once they are graduated because these students
already went through a difficult huddle which is admission process. For example
, getting a seat in any of the IIT's
in India Change noun form
IITs
need
top grades Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
however
, once the person Add the comma(s)
,however
clear
the cut Change the verb form
clears
of
marks he Replace the word
off
who
can easily get hired by fortune 500 Correct pronoun usage
apply
similarly
big 4 companies with an amazing package. Since the Correct your spelling
benchmark
bench mark
is higher Correct your spelling
benchmark
students
will get into the
Correct article usage
a
Correct your spelling
competitive
competative
mind which helps to increase the standard of Correct your spelling
competitive
education
.
On the other hand
, by
admitting Change preposition
apply
the
scholars without any Correct article usage
apply
criteria’s
in the universities may help Change noun form
criteria
individuals
who really wanted to learn. However
, this
may adversely affects
Change the verb form
affect
majority
of the crowd who struggled hard to get good grades. Eventually, people might lose interest Add an article
the majority
a majority
for
learning which can cause serious illiteracy among the citizens. For an instance, when the world witnessed Covid-19 in the year 2020, CBSC schools in India declared all Change preposition
in
students
who were in 10 and 12 grade
does not have to write any exams on top of that they are promoted. Fix the agreement mistake
grades
This
later became a controversy among students
and even affected individuals
adversely. Hence
it is necessary to have certain guidelines to get into territory education
.
To sum up, I believe that stand of education
is important. But how can it be analysed? through
setting Change preposition
apply
cut off
marks for entering college is necessary on top of that it can even develop competition among Add a hyphen
cut-off
students
which gradually helps in rising the standard of the
Correct article usage
apply
education
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