Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others believe that universities must accept student of all ages regardless their previous grades. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few

individuals

argue that territory

education

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to be given

for

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the ones who have top score while others opine that college

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to consider all the people applying for the studies no matter their age or even their past grades.

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these perspectives are different I support the former statement which I will depict in the following essays along with my opinion in the

last

.

To begin

with, once the criteria for getting

seat

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in the university is raised

up

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, according to the marks it can pave

way

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towards

quality

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of

education

. Because only the ones who are interested in studying will be present in the college

hence

teaching them won’t be a concern

similarly

, it can even help the companies to choose the

individuals

for jobs once they are graduated because these

students

already went through a difficult huddle which is admission process.

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, getting a seat in any of the

IIT's

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in India

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top grades

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, once the person

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the cut

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marks he

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can easily get hired by fortune 500

similarly

big 4 companies with an amazing package. Since the

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bench mark

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is higher

students

will get into

the

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competitive

competative

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mind which helps to increase the standard of

education

.

On the other hand

,

by

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admitting

the

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scholars without any

criteria’s

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in the universities may help

individuals

who really wanted to learn.

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,

this

may adversely

affects

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majority

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of the crowd who struggled hard to get good grades. Eventually, people might lose interest

for

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learning which can cause serious illiteracy among the citizens. For an instance, when the world witnessed Covid-19 in the year 2020, CBSC schools in India declared all

students

who were in 10 and 12

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does not have to write any exams on top of that they are promoted.

This

later became a controversy among

students

and even affected

individuals

adversely.

Hence

it is necessary to have certain guidelines to get into territory

education

. To sum up, I believe that stand of

education

is important. But how can it be analysed?

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setting

cut off

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marks for entering college is necessary on top of that it can even develop competition among

students

which gradually helps in rising the standard of

the

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education

.