Describe a time when the weather caused you to change your plan.

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I remember that
time
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when
i
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was studying
bachlore
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bachelor
bachelors
i
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had changed my plans
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because
becuse
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because
of the
wether
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weather
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.
On
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that
time
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i
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had a lot of tasks to do, but it was at the weekend
then
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i
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I
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choose
choosed
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to
went
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out with my
campping
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camping
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stuff
stuf
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stuff
then
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i
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went to the desert to stay the night long to clear my mind and
engoying
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enjoying
the
wther
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other
weather
, fire, a lot of quite, clear air.
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, that
time
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gave me a lot of energy to come back and get
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everything
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every thing
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everything
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done with
a
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high quality as much as
i
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can. So the wither here in
saudi
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arabia
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is
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different
deffrent
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different
between the
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city's
citys
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cities
depon
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depend
depot
on the city place, is that city
on
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a high ground, lower, it has sea.
Moreover
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,
usualy
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usually
it depends on the person
is
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if
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he like
the
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cold wether, hot,
levelld
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or levelld
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. and the
almoust
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almost
most
pepole
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people
as far as I know like the cold
wether
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weather
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. I
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usually
usualy
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usually
put on my plans
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travel
travill
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travel
to
cold
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a cold
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area
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, often the
wither
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weather
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came to me and
i
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I
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enjoying
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enjoy
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it
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apply
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the
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then
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when it
disapper
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disappear
i
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I
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follow
folow
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follow
it. But
some
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sometimes
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time
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, it should be
seruous
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serious
to finish the task to avoid
delay
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delaying
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the important thing in
the
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live
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