Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Getting married at a certain

age

differs from in country to another. Legalizing

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before 21

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is totally an absurd idea and I do not agree with it at all . in the following

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I will illustrate the reason from my own

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perspective

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perspective

.

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prominant

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prominent

to know that obliging people into getting married after 21 is ridiculous and no one will commit to

this

idea. Absolutely, it can backfire in some conservative communities like in the middle east and east Europe

for example

.Families will

stubborn

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and get their children to get married before the

age

of 21 . plus, in some

countries

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the legal

age

of

marriage

is already 18 so no need to push it

further

.

In addition

, if the

intentions

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of the 21 years party

is

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for couples to be mature, who could guarantee something like

this

,

otherwise

we will run a mental checkup for every couple before getting married , which is not a practical procedure to do.

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, others will justify

this

law due to the financial status of the couples before the

age

of 21, that they still did not graduate and may be

on

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loan

debts

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to pay for school.

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, into not

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their career or even got a

full time

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job

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. Well,

this

might sound reasonable in some

countries

but in other

countries

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not a big deal due to the free education system in these

countries

from

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kindergarten

kindergarden

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kindergarten

till

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college, plus their

parents

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assistance in the

marriage

sometimes from A to Z To sum up, putting regulations on

marriage

age

not less than 21, will end up that no one will commit to

this

law and it will not be implemented

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one

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the ground.