You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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While some
people
believe that social
media
platforms
,
such
as Facebook or
twitter
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for example
have a negative impact on young
people
to form personal
relationships
, others believe that these
platforms
bring
people
along together. I advocate
with
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the
second
opinion which we will discuss in
this
topic. Social
media
platforms
can have a negative
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effect
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affect
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effect
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on younger
people
only when it is
missued
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issued
misused
.
For instance
, m when sharing and posting
oponent
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opponent
political views different from
others
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others'
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point of view,
this
can really put you in a toxic relationship.
Moreover
, criticizing another person on social
media
can cause
to
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a demolishing bonding with others.
In addition
, when we
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overuse
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over use
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overuse
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these
platforms
we give them the privilege to control us not the other way around.
On the other hand
, the world became a small village. So, building blended
relationships
with another person or group of
people
became much
more
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easier for younger ages , without the need to meet face-to-face. Plus, keeping in touch from
long
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a long
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distance is
not
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a not
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complicated
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a complicated
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issue as it used to be.
Moreover
, free calls, texting, and messenger calls became available among all
people
around the world, young and elderly
people
nowadays can make healthy
relationships
,with other
people
without the need to ever see them.
Also
, they can search for old friends and find them with no effort at all. To sum up, the
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misuse
missuse
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misuse
of social
media
for
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by
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young
people
is the primary reason for unbeneficial
relationships
. Rather than that, social
media
platforms
made our world a small village with
people
who could easily communicate
with
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without
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any restrictions
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