Human activity had had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. SOme people think this cannot be changed with others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.
Actually is a true event climate
change
the human being makes in our planet, unfortunately
these many changes Add a comma
unfortunately,
make
some disasters in the way of life around the Verb problem
cause
world
no
only in the humans Correct your spelling
not
also
in Correct word choice
but also
the
Correct article usage
apply
nature
and the wild life
. On one side I think if all the human race Correct your spelling
wildlife
don't
agree all the changes in climate and Change the verb form
doesn't
nature
for
stop devastating actions, Change preposition
to
this
world
can't survive to
our stay and collapse in the next one hundred year under our hands, they mean the imminent extinction of all being live in the Change preposition
apply
world
, included all the animals, nature
and off
course all the human race. Replace the word
of
By
Change preposition
On
Correct article usage
the other
other
side I think Change the wording
another
the
mind Correct article usage
apply
change
is possible through the education movements around the world
what
make a consistent Correct pronoun usage
which
diffrence
and help Correct your spelling
difference
the
people learn how Correct article usage
apply
stop
climate Add the particle
to stop
change
and gurantee
the Correct your spelling
guarantee
preserve
spots like Amazonas, they kind of small but efficient actions make a great Replace the word
preserved
change
in the sad destiny of our planet. In conclusion
I think Add a comma
conclusion,
what
the best way to preserve the Correct pronoun usage
apply
planet
health is Change noun form
planet's
begin
in our houses with little action Change the verb form
to begin
beginning
for
example: 1. Choose organic food. 2. Choose Add the comma(s)
, for
nature
and organic materials. 3. Make less garbage. 4. Manage the use of the car, reduce
it. 5. Use Public transport. 6 Use Bicycle. 7 Stop contamination Correct word choice
and reduce
in
all levels. Change preposition
at
That activities
and many more are the first Change the determiner
That activity
Those activities
step
to stop the earth Change the noun form
steps
die
, if we teach that to our family and friends, we'll make a lot of difference and maybe can save our lives Wrong verb form
from dying
of
Change preposition
from
the
extinction.Correct article usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite