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Something about the education of the young people in the main educational priority of countries. But others believe that educating the adults who cannot read and write is needed by society and we should help more with it. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion

#education #people #priority #countries #adults #society
Education
 is the best weapon to kill the pejoratives of the
nation
. A pool of thought says that
state
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 should
emphasis
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 on
infant's
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infant
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education
. On other hand, a group of people claim that
province
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the province
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 should expedite their annual budget on
adult's
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adult
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education
. I firmly stand with the foremost notion. Because
,
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 today's tot is tomorrow's leader and adult
illiteration
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alliteration
illiterate
 will diminish in
very
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the very
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 short term of time.
A
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The
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below mentioned
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 paragraphs will
portrays
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 my notions. To embark on, the velocity of development of the state
depend
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depends
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 on the literacy rate of
territory
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the territory
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. if, the administration of
nation
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the nation
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concentrate
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concentrates
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 on
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kindergarten's
kindergarten
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the kindergaten's
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kindergaten's
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kindergaten
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education
 mechanism. It will enhance the number of scholars and that group of people will
accelrate
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accelerate
 the development.
For instance
, Finland is
world's
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the world's
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most
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happiest
nation
 on the globe. Because
,
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apply
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 the minor
education
 system of Finland is very strong and
this
 mechanism
remove
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removes
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 the ignorant from adults.
Secondly
, If
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government
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
provide
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provides
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 quality
education
 to kids. It will play a vital role in society
to spread
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spreading
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the
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apply
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awareness
awarness
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awareness
.
This
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phenomena
phenomina
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phenomenon
 will put
the
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an
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 effect on the
adults
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adult's
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age
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to age
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 well and they can get literate at home as well with the help of
youngesters
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youngsters
. In
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a nut
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nut shell
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nutshell
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, the basic
education
 system is the
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backbone
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back bone
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backbone
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 of
nation
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the nation
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 and
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government
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 should make
their
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its
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 expenses on it. Despite
from
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it they
also
 spread an advertisement for child
education
.
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