you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents. in your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be suitable person to employ. say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Parents, I am writing in response to an advertisement for a carer to look after your child. As an experienced nanny, I believe I would be suitable for

this

post due to my effortless ability to nurture children in a warm, professional and consistent manner.

In particular

, I am hopeful to be appointed for

this

position as most of my career has involved working with kids between five-eight

year

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olds

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and believe my genuine passion

working

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with children will allow me to support you.

Moreover

, I previously worked as a primary school teacher and have,

therefore

, a plethora of strategies to help young people - whether it is to provide innovative education or maintain a calm environment. In my free time, I enjoy reading. As you are likely aware, in Australia, there is no shortage of botanical gardens;

thus

, I envision spending a large portion of my leisure time walking and

subathing

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sunbathing

bathing

in the parks. Yours faithfully, Jane Eyre

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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