Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangement for hosting a party for one of your friend's. In your letter tell the manager about the reason for the party Explain what requirements you have As about the availability of facilities and the menu

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to you to make arrangements for a

party

for my friend. Actually, my best friend's birthday is coming and I want to give her a special treat because

week she will fly to a foreign country. As a mentioned that I want to make

this

day precious for her so there are requirements for the

party

. So

this

party

should be held on 23rd Oct on Monday. There should be a huge hall for a

party

because the majority of my friends are coming.

Additionally

, I want you to arrange a setting place with plenty of red flowers and decoration. Special food should be included in the main menus

such

as burgers, pizza for breakfast and for lunch Indian dishes like parathas, malai kofta, coffee and roti

also

be needed.

Additionally

, please arrange some games and music for fun in the afternoon. Please let me know the total cost of

this

party

. I would wait for your reply. Thank you

Rakesha

Correct your spelling

Raksha

Rakesh

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

169 words

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The Closing

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