In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this rule of accommodation have some advantages or disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the maximum number of people living in large
buildings
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in most metropolis.
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kind of accommodation, like
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and all amenities, and the cons are no privacy and not being allowed to renovate the flat. One of the main advantages of living in a large building is that everything in the building is well maintained by the facility management
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team.
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, in Ruwais Housing Society, which is Abu Dhabi's largest housing society, all
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are properly maintained by the company IMECO.
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, the temperature in summer is extremely high, so the facility management HVAC team starts preventive
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before the summer starts so the people will not suffer. Lifts, swimming pools, fire alarms, and other facilities are timely maintained in big
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.
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, the main disadvantage of living in large apartment
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is that the facility
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team does not allow anyone to do renovations without prior permission.
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, almost all the big housing societies in the UAE are not allowing anyone to do any renovation work inside or outside the flat,
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otherwise
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they will give them a fine.
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, due to
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law, many residents are unable to make the changes that they really want to make to their
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to make
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look beautiful. In a nutshell, a fraction of society wants to live in
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type of accommodation to avail the proper
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of the building, while
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, a large number of people just want to leave their apartments just because they are unable to make the changes that they really want.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • large apartment blocks
  • affordable
  • amenities
  • facilities
  • sense of community
  • security
  • public transportation
  • maintenance responsibilities
  • social interaction
  • networking
  • urban lifestyle
  • proximity
  • attractions
  • privacy
  • personal space
  • noise
  • disturbances
  • neighbors
  • outdoor space
  • green areas
  • cramped living conditions
  • dependency
  • management
  • regulations
  • parking spaces
  • individuality
  • customization
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